Saturday, September 15, 2007

When no one smiled, only destiny did!!!!

Smiling all day, I take all that comes my way
Facing every challenge like a warrior, so brave

Confusions galore,
Small and large, like a life consuming tide
Walking in solitude, I introspect
Realisation dawns, that no one really cares
I feel the dissipation of energy
I walk without any crutch, all day long
No one to talk to, no one to share
Lost in my own thoughts, I walk
Stumbled when I trampled on a stone!!!!

I felt I was a "one man army"
Facing a whole batallion all alone
shelling away all that I had, to wage a war against the reality of life
Hoping to win the battle
I started out with a rage
Feeling like a Puissant in the beginning!!!

Time passed by
I realised ,I had paved my path towards final destination
Now I feel, I am a destitute with no choice to make

Death smiled at me
I smiled back!!!!!

4 comments:

Pam said...

Very nice da, especially the last two lines; love it! Keep going!

Unknown said...

kalakaraiyeddda.....kalaraiyaee!!!

aRoOL said...

nice one machi....gud jobb

Unknown said...

'The solitude of loneliness is the elixier of self dependance' Ur not growing into a mature person, ur just churning into a fighting winner. Solitude has a different meaning than loneliness. I hope u understand that soon and smile back at death in a different way. (PS dint know that u changed ur blog address. sorry for the delayed comment)