Tuesday, June 5, 2007

An angel whom I gave a name!!!

God's creation so unique

So perfectly made

Have you seen an angel

Her eyes really soothing

all her gestures just showing care and concern

Her actions only to protect me


She is really magnanimous jus like the lofty mountains

Her kindness vast and spread across like an ocean

Her smile just like the moon's crescent, really comforting

she is the like the clouds showering rain of love

She is as patient as the land, forgiving all the mistake I make and withstanding all the burdens I give her


Her laughter like the chirping of the birds, waking me up with a musical note

Her criticism just strengthening my charecter

Her song so pure and melodious, Just lulls me to sleep

Her lap like the river bed, providing me all the warmth I need to hibernate

I have never heard any one call my name as beautifully as she does

Her yell sounds like the thunder in the dark skies,

She taught me humility

She brought me joy

She gave me all that I needed, love

When it was cold she gave me warmth

She taught me how this world would treat me

She prepared me to face this world

She is the one who gave me all that I needed

She is the one who gave me life

She is the one who gave me birth

She is an angel who never let me down

I gave the angel a name

ma




6 comments:

Unknown said...

Mere paas Maa hai. Tere Paas kya hai. Mere paas Dosth hai.... :) All of a sudden Y so much care on ur mom... No words to describe ur gf..

Viswajith said...

ahaa...no comments...sorry leave me outta this!

Unknown said...

nice one ra...but i think that you should try to broaden ur horizons. try writing without you or ur gf or anybody concerned about u. for example..a nice topic would be war..try writing about that..

aRoOL said...

daii..'amma endru azaikathey uyir illayee' paatoda english version naa idu..j k...gud job...but innum konjam poeticaa (like previous posts) mathiri ezhuthirindhaa weightaa irukum...

Aarthi and Suresh said...

hey gud one ... amma sentiment .. thaayir siranda kovilum illai .. thandai sol mikka mandiram illai .. nan appo padi kamchada summa ezudinen . :-)

Pavithra said...

hey..its nice to read this blog...totally different from previous ones....thank god u are out of ur GF poems and this one truely reflects ur state of mind.
and ya.. do write something which doesnt concern u